Wednesday 5 March 2014

5/3/14 Lesson Summary by Index No. 12(John Cheong Zhan Hao)

Quick and Dirty way to Write Intros for Essays

Example:
Parents often believe that it is better to be safe than sorry. Do you consider young people to be too protected?
Issue: Parents being too protective.

Word Association
Sorry
killed, regret, harm, guilt, bad situation

Safe
Risk Averse
Assurance
No Danger
Precaution

Too protected
Overbearing
Tyrannical
Anxiety
No freedom
Prison

Sample Intro: Many young people find their parents overbearing. Parents often restrict their charges' freedom as they believe some harm may befall their children should they be left entirely alone. Therefore, they take various 'precautions' really necessary? I think not. I think that the way parents behave has resulted in your people being over protected.

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